(04-24-1995 / Florida)

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Aloneee.....(adam)

ALONE....
Sitting alone.......
in my dark creepy room..........
and that abhorrent feeling
is eating my soul.................

It really hurts
when you feel you are alone...............
still waiting..
for some one to come and knock your door...........
or even give you a call...............
still waiting..
for someone to help you through it all....
still waiting..
for someone who can prevent the fall of your soul...........

I cant understand
people anymore...........
and i have adesire
to crush them all...............

I want to fly to another palce
that is safe.....and warm......
where i can find a friend to tell me:
never frown...............
cause you are not a lone.........anymore...
.

-cherish

Submitted: Thursday, October 09, 2008
Edited: Monday, September 28, 2009


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  • David Threadgold (10/9/2008 7:28:00 AM)

    Well written with a powerful message of loneliness. well done Regards Dave T

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