Alonely Suicide Poem by lindsay birch

Alonely Suicide

Rating: 2.5


by the railway lines she sits
with no-one but herself
slowly and deeply across her arms
with a sharpner blade she cuts

no-one around to see her pain
she suffers all alone
as the train approches she stands up
walking on the tracks

the driver acting quickly
slams upon his brakes
the train coming to a halt
stopping before her face

she didnt move
but stared at it
for she wanted to die
the driver now in distress

when asked the reason why
only one answer did she give
'i dont want to live no more
i really want to die'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Drexler 28 February 2012

i can very well relate... very deep in both ways keep it up!

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majid Alsaady 29 November 2010

writing about the despariate and the lonely is avery brave attempt. but a poet usually raises the ideas of life and love.brave and daring.u express urself clearly with a flow of words.

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majid Alsaady 29 November 2010

writing about the despariate and the lonely is avery brave attempt. but a poet usually raises the ideas of life and love.

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