$alvation Poem by Deb Fowler

$alvation

Rating: 2.8


Rented sign
in bold letters
'Souls Wanted, Apply Within'

The door is always open
you may walk right in
aisle of pews
for you choose
what seat you'll take
to lose your blues

For the price of your time
God is divine
Put your fears to rest
go and confess

Save your soul
pay no toll
God is here for you
will you believe?

Your soul is wanted
look within
the price is right
no one denied

Take your mother
take your friend
help them seek
salvation at the end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I do like this but have I got it right or wrong? I ask because I got the impression it was written sarcastically. Esra Sloblock

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 August 2006

VERY UNIQUE PIECE, AND I READ IT SEVERAL TIMES WHICH I DO NOT DO AS A RULE...WELL STRUCTURED AND RHYTHM IN SYNC SOLID AND MOVING PENNING, DEB...KEEP THAT PEN POPPIN! '''''''''''''''''''FJR

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