Alveolar Osteitis. Poem by Mary X

Alveolar Osteitis.



you sit by yourself
all the time.
I wonder what you wonder
about
every time your
eyes glide.

maybe your mind has a picture
inside it. red streams
and green flowers,
oral skies and penetrating
cream-coloured houses.

you file neatly into every room.
you fit nicely in your seat
as I slump with dry socket
in mine.
operation time for the infected

that couldn’t resist a cigarette.
that couldn’t resist temptations
of all kinds. was that me? or was
that you? even though
like love; I don’t know you.

bring the gums of infection
out with a syringe
and throw them away.
then, maybe, I’ll be able
to talk to you without
a mouth full of thorns.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Roberts 23 September 2008

vERY ORIGIONAL iF i GET TIME i'LL TRY TO WRITE A REPLY

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Joseph Daly 26 September 2006

I find this a very vicious poem Mary, perhaps the most vicious that I have ever read. That you provoke such a reaction is all credit to your skills. I don't thing I need go on about style and that. I will only end up repeating myself. Suffice to say that this is brilliant. The title being a great one. Titles are important!

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Michael Philips 26 September 2006

I very much like the imagery in this poem, particularly in the 2nd,3rd, and final stanzas.

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