Matt Mooney

Rookie - 59 Points (1943 / South Galway, Ireland.)

Always Eighteen


The clearness of a dream
I had in bed last night
Has dimmed at dawn-
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  • Rookie - 1 Points Charles Monroe (10/29/2013 1:45:00 PM)

    'Top One-Hundred Poets Club'
    Out of Thousands and thousands of Poems online
    Mine was number sixty-five.
    Poet with a Thousand Kills
    But with weak promotion skills.
    Poem Hunters lose their way
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    All is fair in War and Love
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    Smiling proud with Pen in Hand
    We remain the Underrated.
    It will take a thousand Poets
    Just to help you stay afloat
    But nothing beats the satisfaction
    To receive an honest Vote.
    Poem Hunts the lamest Ducks
    I Searched You a thousand bucks
    Poison Ink reigns from above
    Top One-hundred Poets Club

    P.X

    #65 Charles Monroe


    Novus Ordo Seclorum (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Dipy Hermonite (10/20/2013 2:17:00 PM)

    A nice write. Have cast my vote (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,596 Points Susan Lacovara (10/20/2013 12:34:00 AM)

    I have indeed voted for your lovely poem...sometimes the bittersweet return, of a lover, lost, even if only in a fleeting dream, is enough to make the heart dance again...as if 18...and unaware of the long life road ahead...beautifully expressed. I now take your words, with me, and drift towards sleep...in search of my lost love. Goodnight and PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tom Bannon (10/19/2013 2:54:00 PM)

    Fantastic piece - Love the dialogue in the poem and another lovely memory put down beautifully in verse (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jim Larkin (10/19/2013 10:10:00 AM)

    Awesome poetry Matt. I love it. Very touching. Keep writing such great poetry. A+++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Joyce (10/19/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    The tender memories of youth. Powerful. As lovely as I left her at her father's hearth. Soars your heart back in time. Well done. Best of luck. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,525 Points Bri Edwards (10/12/2013 10:11:00 PM)

    i especially enjoyed the following lines:

    slept she crept:
    Always eighteen.

    That was the only thing she said
    As with the dream she left my bed.

    besides enjoying the rhymes, i found your lines very picturesque.
    thanks for sharing. i give it an excellent, which i don't give easily. in fact if i wait too long to vote i may drop it a notch. na. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,059 Points Kanav Justa (12/29/2012 4:02:00 AM)

    It touched my heart straight away..... awsum writee (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 363 Points Rekha Mandagere (2/8/2011 11:22:00 PM)

    The thought 'Love's Labour- is never- Lost' is highly moving one towards deep faith in life.it is a great gift to all of us. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points G Sweeney (1/7/2011 7:36:00 AM)

    A very wonderful, moving poem. always eighteen, yes that is where i want to be and love's labor never lost is a beautiful beautiful thought to hold onto forever. gayle (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Constance K Yost (1/5/2011 10:17:00 AM)

    a supernova, Matt, from start to finish...Those dreams, we always wake up!
    Constance (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 514 Points Juan Olivarez (11/15/2010 6:33:00 PM)

    Excellent poetry Matt, your writing reminds me of The works of William Butler Yeats.
    It is definitely a ten (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Oconnell (11/4/2010 6:47:00 AM)

    CERTAINLY WORTH A 10 AND MORE! ONE HUMDINGER OF A WRITE - THANKS. BEST WISHES, JOHN (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bert Bell (10/27/2010 10:39:00 PM)

    This is an absolutely marvelous poem. It's so poignant and visceral and the images are keen and vivid. It's simply splendid. 10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 86 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (5/30/2010 3:28:00 AM)

    'Love's Labour- is never- Lost' ~ Maestro

    She left the virtuality. ‘Into my head as I slept she crept: /Always eighteen. For future contemplation and regurgitation to be all time in nostalgia ‘Always eighteen’ even decades after

    Excellent poetry Sir
    10/10 [for all eighteens]
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mary Joy Lumanog (5/7/2010 4:39:00 PM)

    A very nice and compelling poem to read... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anita Trivedi (4/23/2010 1:41:00 AM)

    I use to believe dreams are beutiful but after reading this one my Believe has became more stronger........ its real beuty............. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Rachel Ann Butler (11/8/2009 4:28:00 PM)

    'As lovely as I left her
    At her father's hearth'

    Rachel Ann Butler (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (9/15/2009 6:38:00 AM)

    A magical write Matt....The romantic ink this has been written with stands proud through out....We all feel our youth return inside with love....it cures us all....beautiful composition 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Buscador Del Palabra (8/30/2009 3:29:00 PM)

    I love the impertinence of contradicting Shakespeare. In fact, impertinence is one of my favorite virtues, and so easily accomplished, since no truism can be always right. I really love this 10 of a poem. Our age makes it that much sweeter.
    Mike (Report) Reply



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