Amar Halud Pakhi Tui Poem by Amitava Sur

Amar Halud Pakhi Tui

Rating: 5.0


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Jhorher raate hariye jaoa
amar halud pakhi tui,
ore amar pran sajani-
amay dishne faki tui.

kenoi ba tui kaache eli
ei montare tui loote nili,
keno tobe jhorher raate
hariye geli tui?
bol na re tui halud pakhi
bol na amay tui.

torei sudhu khuje berhai
virher maajhe ekla je aaj
bondhu priya pran shajani -
amar halud pakhi tui.

aalto kore chumu khabo
aador kore jorhiye nebo
rakhbo tore buker maajhe
pakhi ayna fire tui.


Jhorher raate hariye jaoa
amar halud pakhi tui


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Amitav (18.5.2014)
6-15 am, residence

Thursday, October 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 23 October 2014

My understanding is not clear Amitava, as I am unable to read properly Bengli. Still I enjoy it, thanks.

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Roseann Shawiak 04 January 2015

Amitava, I cannot yet understand Bengali, but I read it through it to familiarize myself with your language, it is very soothing. I can feel the emotion somehow and believe it was written about Rakhee. RoseAnn

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Roseann Shawiak 04 January 2015

Amitava, I cannot yet understand Bengali, but I read it through it to familiarize myself with your language, it is very soothing. I can feel the emotion somehow and believe it was written about Rakhee. RoseAnn

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Srabanti Guha 29 October 2014

What a lovely penning! ! The ardent desire to get back the beloved, so endearingly the poem is written, it touches the heart. A beautiful write.

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Ramesh Rai 28 October 2014

Pakhi to aar phirbe na kintu pakhir mriidul hansi thakbe eyi jivan kale khubee sundar lekha hoyechhe.thank you so much for sharing this soulful poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 October 2014

Khub bhalo hoyeche, Ammaadir man ta kakhno ginche niye aami jante parchii naa. Atha excellent poem. Very beautiful writing.

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