Ambience Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

Ambience

Rating: 5.0


A stuttering silence,
and some doubtful words.
a voice,
congruent with the wind’s whisper.
a protruding me,
from my own chest.
a crossroad
of confusion.
a succumbed seduction
of a faraway familiarity.
and a dislocated fluttering thought,
floating in the night’s darkness.
Some snowflakes,
a cold indifference.
a gift of an unimagined tear,
in this festival of pathos.

Even I lie,
in there….somewhere.
In this wilderness,
a mere camouflage.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 03 June 2009

a wonderful collage of emotions on this vast canvas of life, sarvesh...i'm more and more amazed at your talent as u keep writing! well done, dear young man...

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Maitreyee Joshi 04 June 2009

what an ambience created by you words.great work, sarvesh.10

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Vaibhav Pandey 05 June 2009

great expressions my dear friend....very deep...10

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Ritty Patnaik 09 July 2009

an ambience of sorrow and confusions at the crossjoints ofchanging times.very well written as usual sarvesh!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 09 June 2009

Great flow of words, establishing an arcane expression. Thrilling.

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Brishti Mazumdar 09 June 2009

Wow......Friend your thought process deserves kudos...just loved to glide thru your verse...felt like quoting lines...but then found that I had to quote the whole poem...10++...Brishti...

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Reshma Ramesh 08 June 2009

wow! ! why didnt i think of this..........amazing well done

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Ency Bearis 08 June 2009

great concept...well narrated...nice....10

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