Brian Taylor

Rookie - 133 Points (England)

America, America - Poem by Brian Taylor

We raised our hats to you, Mr Lincoln.
We believed every word that you said.
And when life spilled into darkness
in a night of theatre,
we believed, even though you were dead.

From the decay that was Europe, we sent you our sons
to escape from a thousand-year prison called home;
from money and serfdom and warfare and guns;
from Ireland and Germany, Russia and Rome.

We believed, Mr Lincoln. We knew. We could wait.

From the slave-fields of Africa, we heard all men are equal
and America, like God, would apply it that way.
And having applied it, would insist on the sequel;
that all men were free in this African day.

From Asia, the bent backs of our human machines
learned of machines that would give them their rest;
learned they could stand straight and what freedom means;
and, holding heads high, put it all to the test.

And what did we get from all the bright promise?
And what did we learn when we gave you our vote?
From a heap of dead redskins to a pile of dead commies,
you could write the Lord’s Prayer on a used five-buck note.


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Comments about America, America by Brian Taylor

  • Gold Star - 9,802 Points Heather Wilkins (5/30/2013 3:43:00 PM)

    Mr. Lincoln believed in equality for all human beings. Bravo for him (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points . . (7/24/2010 9:39:00 AM)

    It is refreshing to see criticisms of a country that has long forgotten it has many problems.
    Enjoyed your write very much.
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  • Rookie - 108 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (6/19/2010 4:14:00 AM)

    i also salute to Mr. Lincoln... i wish I could see him someday in heaven.... nice poem... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 16, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 18, 2013


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