Amid Paragraphs Poem by Catrina Heart

Amid Paragraphs

Rating: 4.9


From the best seller of novels
And carousel tale of truth and lies
Pages turn in each day of who we are
On the tears and smiles embossed on

Honesty is catch basket one leashed out
Of inner sensations of hot blood freezing veins
Wings of mind flutter on the mirage of deep crimson tide
As soft pebbles are lost on index amid paragraphs


3rd of December,2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 03 December 2009

lovely between paragraphs many things 10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 December 2009

From the best seller of novels And carousel tale of truth and lies Pages turn in each day of who we are On the tears and smiles embossed on we cling to truth andfindout own way amistall and leave fine imprint of trustfulness.andthat is whatis desried of a personand life.I f you can offer still the sbest then it is fulfillment of your mission..cae less wht is aroundus butthink shat bestwse can offer on our part and in doing so if we find good and hoenst companionsthen life mission is fullfilled...lovely poem andi likedit most..keep it up....10 read mine not easy.... whathappensif.. what is common

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Hari Khabrani 04 December 2009

What is advised or expressed Amid Paragraphs, defines poet's/writers truth, feelings and falsehood depending the critics of readers. Nice communicative poem for both writers and readers.10+

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Ency Bearis 04 December 2009

read in between the lines...there are meaning thoughts to assess in the paragraphs...a thought provoking poem, nicely presented.....10

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Mamta Agarwal 03 December 2009

very subtle and intense at the same time.10 Mamta

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Eyan Desir 03 December 2009

Nice wording and a fine poetic tone Well said no debate this is great....10ssssssss

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