Amiss Poem by Jasjiv Singh

Amiss

Rating: 5.0


Away tonite alone i cry
Seeding the thoughts which might
Help me tomorrow to see my sight
Without which i would surely die

I saw my youth go running by
So fast as it took the final flight
Couldn't hold on, succumbed to my plight
Now i miss it, i do know why

I know now what's got to be done
Embrace whatever is left of time
Your memory, with the past I shun
Though with you i felt so sublime
All this while i've been so stubborn
Admitting that you were my only crime

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 20 July 2009

''Help me tomorrow to see my sight Without which i would surely die'' nice lyric poem, well penned with deep ideas.........10

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Khushjiv Sethi 09 December 2005

Amditance is grace Being in Now is bliss

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