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What do you think this poem is about?

An Ace

Give me a ten and I'll be your friend

Give me a nine and I won't decline

Keep it at eight and you'll still be a mate

Well a seven's not heaven but i'll let it be

If it's a six I may write you a letter

Choosing 'choice words..like

It will get better

If it's a five well I'm a Bee Gee

HA HA HA HA, STAYIN ALIVE

Give me a four and I may show you the door

A three and a two is better than one

And BEING NUMBER ONE!

Is seldom done.

So reversing the flow

I'll call it an Ace

Not for being too slow

But for keeping my place

At the top of the grade

Number 1 is seldom achieved

And can't be undone

So bravo To ten or a one

Whatever the outcome

I've won! !

yvette smith july 09

Submitted: Sunday, July 19, 2009


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  • Graham Russell (8/10/2009 4:19:00 PM)

    that was really good.....

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  • Anderson R. Crowe (8/8/2009 8:51:00 AM)

    This was a fun read. I like the way you rhyme. Nothing forced about it.

    Anderson.

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  • Autumn Jones (7/24/2009 2:13:00 PM)

    This one is good. I like the rhyme and it is really light and flowy. Nice. I give it a 9.

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