An Advice Poem by Asif Andalib

An Advice



When words of love come to an end
Go for some sweet music my friend.

When love is gone only hope remains
Look for someone to relieve your pains.

Whenever life becomes very difficult
Try to tolerate the sorrows and insult.

When no one takes the trouble to help
Rely on Almighty and yourself.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philip Jose 15 October 2011

''When love is gone only hope remains Look for someone to relieve your pains.'' a well written couplet, , , , a well written poem too, , , go on sir.

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Unwritten Soul 15 October 2011

The best advices from you here...Do live it in our life everyday. May it works well for us as it really hopeful and real thing to embrace _Unwritten Soul

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Renu Kakkar 15 October 2011

nice advice...well written

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Osman Gani 15 October 2011

Nice poem with a message. The poem is so optimistic about the ups and downs of life. The two line stanza is also interesting as first on depict the problem and the second one the solution. Thanks for sharing. :)

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Jacqui Broad 15 October 2011

I'm going to consider myself a friend, and take your advice. It's so inspirational, one just wants to walk out the door and greet the sun. Great poem.

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Cm Montepio 24 October 2011

when someone discriminate you... just smile and try to understand... when someone judge you... just laugh and take it as a compliment... when someone hated you... just make them as an inspiration... if someone seems so bad to you... just thank them and be good to them... remember you are not like them...

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Jenna Bergman 23 October 2011

this is an amzing poem... gave me a lot of hope and made me feel better about today

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Vipins Puthooran 16 October 2011

An inspirational advice... Well written

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Bella Hernandez 16 October 2011

very nice poem... so interestingly with love, hope and along with the most important of all God!

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Prachi Agrawal 16 October 2011

nice poem............as well as message of your poem

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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