An Adviceto You Poem by amir mohammad islami chalandar

An Adviceto You

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I have an advice hey you guy

Climb welfare tree it is not high

Live handsomely, catch world nice

Do not choose the best things with dice

Assist the poor, help the young

If not you are walking on a narrow ice

Do not bother anyone in the world

Not only insects but also a mice

Do benefits here cos of this

Do buy please a cheap merchandise

Do not sell hereafter to mortal abode

If you do say good bye paradise

Friday, May 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 22 June 2014

Beautiful flow of words...Do not choose the best things with dice I loved reading each lines.

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Gajanan Mishra 30 May 2014

very good writing, thanks, I like it. please red my poems and comment.

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