An Alien Poem by Sandhya S.N

An Alien

Rating: 5.0


I met an alien from beyond
Beyond the plane where I could reach
He landed in a carriage
With wheels of warming words and thoughts

He holds a scarf in his own hand
With magic spell of making love
He owe it from the Aphrodite
The goddess of loving passions

I knew it clearly as a sky
The diverging sky as well as air
Colour, culture and the tongue
The age and pave of our life

But I felt it never being
Being with an alien being
Lest I lifted to a plain
And felt as if I were at home.

But we talked and walked together
Beholding alphabets of love
And knew each other to the core
Without the knowledge of sight and hear

What shall I call that feel?
Is it the real unseen friendship?
I can’t make out a word for that
That lovely, sparkling relation

But I feel it in my heart
The poignant flaming bond in life
Is nothing other than that;
The bond of love and loving care

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Harris 08 June 2009

This is an interesting and nicely written poem on a challenging subject, one that you do not see very often, although I have written on aliens mating with earth women and men several times, Sandhya, in what I like to call Sci-Fi poems. This, however is more of a romantic poem than a Sci-Fi poem, and I enjoyed reading it, as it's very well expressed. Carl.

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Surya . 08 June 2009

this is yet another wonderfull piece from redoubtable poet sandhya. this time around a certain mystery has been added. words and lines are very good. in total it gives a nice feel.love this poem voted 10 surya

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Indira Babbellapati 11 June 2009

reads like a dream-experience!

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Sam Varghis 19 May 2014

Your poem is on 'wheels of warm words' and generate 'love passions'. Beautiful...............Pls find some of my writings in this site. Best regards, sam varghis

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Kesav Easwaran 08 December 2009

alien...yes; what was alien there? the feeling of love! raw, first time, as never before! poem mystically romantic and more-than-symbolic...good work Sandhya...10

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Yelena M. 14 August 2009

romance in its purest form...agree with Ted and waiting for the second part :) thanks for sharing. A.

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Ted M 01 August 2009

vowww! what an imagination! You are really a Romantic. When is the sequel going to be released? Part II

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Jt Jayasingh 30 July 2009

A great dream. Romantic. I think this unlived life is sweeter than the lived. Beautiful imageries

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Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
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