An Angel Goes To Bed Poem by Uriah Hamilton

An Angel Goes To Bed

Rating: 5.0


It is raining
Slowly
In Detroit tonight.
It makes you think
God has
No sense of time.
Somewhere in the world
There is a girl
Who should have
Her forehead kissed
Before she falls asleep

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 13 May 2006

What a beautifully tender poem Uriah. I think the kiss to the forehead is such a delicate touch...I love that. It gives such a sense of security (I'm not sure why) . As you know it's been raining here for the last couple days...it comforts me to know you and I are sharing this same rain. Very nice work Uriah. Sincerely, Mary

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Duncan Wyllie 13 May 2006

Absolute Bliss for the eye, I'm sure that God is watching and her time will come, Love duncan X

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Will Barber 13 May 2006

This is very evocative... a very fine poem, indeed.

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Pia Andersson 13 August 2006

Oh Uriah..I am sure that all the angels are watching over this poem...you make me sad and happy at the same tame..I have never thought about Gods timing that way I am sure that He has his reasons..Such a painfully beautiful poem from you-Pia

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Joyce Chelmo 22 May 2006

I love this as much for what it doesn't say as for what it does. Beautifully succinct! Joyce

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Konjit Berhane 15 May 2006

WeLL you Have Written a wonderful poem Uriah..... well may be an angel Would do that and TrusT me whEn i teLL u that God has a Great senses of Time....lol nice one uriah **KoNi**

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Ernestine Northover 14 May 2006

You're going to have to go out there and find her now Uriah. Good hunting. Love Ernestine XXX

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Sandra Fowler 14 May 2006

As gentle and soothing as the falling rain. Heaven must truly smile on this one, Uriah. Warm regards, Sandra

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