RyuOh Kenshin

Rookie (11/71989 / teaneck, NJ)

An Angel In The Water - Poem by RyuOh Kenshin

Like The Goddess of the Sea
Like A Mermaid In Heaven
Shrouded in the icy blue sea, accompanied by the sun phoenix's rays lingering and dancing in the water,
She hides in the water where the sun glared into the sea,

She is beloved by sailors and pirates,
They all want to feel her ocean heart of love in the forbidden sea,
But sometimes she can be devious,
Sometimes you can see her in the mist where hazy smokey clouds block the sun,
Her head popping out of the her and you can see her glowing heaven devious eyes piercing through the gray mist staring into your firelight soul,

Sailors would give anything to be with her,
they would lure into her trap and she will twist their warm sun raving hearts into cold and fozen ice,

Even though they heard about this beautiful creature,
they would still go after her and hunt for her pearl ocean heart,
Their's something about her that make every guy crazy
she mesmerize their minds and hearts, making them into
bloodless zombies swimming blind into the sea but guided by the pulses of her aura,

You can hear laughter echoing in the fog and Adventurers would swim in the middle of the ocean for her, but before they reached her, something lurking in the shadows of the ocean reached them first and drag them under the sea, filling their lungs of hollow water because they tried to reach to a angel in the water

Comments about An Angel In The Water by RyuOh Kenshin

  • Rookie Blue Angel (8/17/2007 5:21:00 PM)

    My Gosh a true treasure! I thank you so very much as for this is the most beautiful piece that I've read so far as for the Ocean I love so much, and for your words go beyond LOVE and PASSION to a Woman in a body of FISH so free to dive and Enjoy the Charm that she carries on, STILL for LOVE to FACE the Water and Breath IN! Thanks again! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Jennifer Unknown (8/14/2007 11:47:00 AM)

    Interesting. It paints pictures. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tears Of Sorrow (7/28/2007 1:05:00 PM)

    love it. it's beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie BEAU GOLDEN (7/21/2007 3:59:00 PM)

    Such a beautiful poem, nicely done. Beautiful descriptions.-beau (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 21, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 22, 2011

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