An Angel Slaps Love Poem by Mike poet

An Angel Slaps Love

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As sharp as a tack.
Like a slap in the face.
Do you know the kind
tongue blind
takes away your taste.

Rip's out your heart
lies tied in lace
outlined
love lights dimmed shine
shows this love a waist



Three fingers grasping ink pen
a journal in the other hand.
It hurts to see what cannot be
no longer part of my lifes plan.




This love was special and she is an Angel of a sort.
Just not my Angel.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 30 March 2012

Love this one Mike, pity she is not your Angel.

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Wahab Abdul 19 March 2012

''As sharp as a tack. Like a slap in the face. Do you know the kind tongue blind takes away your taste.'' It is the tongue which is blind killing the taste, what an irony, juxtaposition and paradoxical! Very good use of the poetical devices in the poem, these characteristics bears the traits of the modern poetry, i like the poem as like mine.

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