An Apology Poem by Abdallah Gamal
An Apology
</>I don't know how.... I don't know why
I can't believe how.. how dared I?
Because of my madness.. I now cry and cry
Your character impressed me... so how can I?
forget your pretty.. pretty eye
if you won't forgive me.. I'll die
I'm now so regretful.. so so shy
I don't know how.... I don know why
I can't believe how.. how dared I?
Because of my madness.. i'm now cry and cry.
An excellent and well crafted write! 10+++ Definitely, you got what it takes to inspire the whole World, talent! Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! ...
great job Abdallah i can't believe you are 16 and talented this way, you express hard emotions and although you are 16 but seems to have great life experience
Very nice and true to the name.. it IS cute. One can add a tune to it to make it sing like a pop song. Good Work.
with an apology like this one you will be forgiven I'm sure. very sweet and touching.
That's lovely. I'm sure no one could reject an apology like that.
Awww this is really cute! ! Who wont forgive if the apology is so sweet! Aditi
Way to go Abdallah...this is so so cute poem... the start of your poem really caught my attention....very creative... loved it
u r really good at writing so far of wat i have read some of it is better then my own
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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nice poem, good work