Fay Slimm

Rookie - 20 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

An Astral Kiss. - Poem by Fay Slimm

Beginning in the mind, engaging sight
With words, though written, having greater draw
Of spirit, and over-ridden with mighty
Sword-like slices, hack my unconcern before
Exploding, and I am un-masked. To know you
More becomes my task. Aims take a special shape
Being nearer you becomes real joy. Start undoing
And arranging daily duty, to re-make
Opportunity. Listening then closer still
To meanings of each line, and divining
From the flow a soul-link closeness, fills
Every day with assurance that you're mine
And I am yours. Delight in knowing this
Sustains my heart. Thus starts an astral  kiss.


Comments about An Astral Kiss. by Fay Slimm

  • Rookie Juneil Sechico (2/12/2009 2:02:00 AM)

    Nice imagination gal! mwahhh! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 145 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (2/4/2009 9:52:00 AM)

    thats the kiss I am talking about. perfect everytime (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 232 Points Ann Beard (2/2/2009 3:15:00 PM)

    Out of this world Fay beautiful. Kind regards Ann (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Fiona Davidson (1/31/2009 6:46:00 PM)

    This is sheer beauty Fay....thank you...Fi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Viola Grey (1/31/2009 5:30:00 PM)

    I love that this goes deeper than simple awareness...if I could astral travel, I know exactly who I'd aim a kiss at...nice write Fay. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (1/31/2009 1:43:00 PM)

    Very beautiful, and gentle the poems, expensive... 10x10
    Thank you, Fay
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kris Smith (1/31/2009 10:15:00 AM)

    That is a beautiful write Fay so well put together and full of happiness thanks Chris 10 ++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (1/31/2009 10:04:00 AM)

    words rain in colours on the windowpane, warming your heart... draw your souls closer each day...there starts a love so heavenly.......... beautiful poem...10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew mark Wilkinson (1/31/2009 9:22:00 AM)

    Sounds like a heavenly kiss...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 31, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 31, 2009


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