An Astral Kiss. Poem by Fay Slimm

An Astral Kiss.

Rating: 5.0


Beginning in the mind, engaging sight
With words, though written, having greater draw
Of spirit, and over-ridden with mighty
Sword-like slices, hack my unconcern before
Exploding, and I am un-masked. To know you
More becomes my task. Aims take a special shape
Being nearer you becomes real joy. Start undoing
And arranging daily duty, to re-make
Opportunity. Listening then closer still
To meanings of each line, and divining
From the flow a soul-link closeness, fills
Every day with assurance that you're mine
And I am yours. Delight in knowing this
Sustains my heart. Thus starts an astral  kiss.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 31 January 2009

Sounds like a heavenly kiss...10

0 0 Reply
Catrina Heart 31 January 2009

words rain in colours on the windowpane, warming your heart... draw your souls closer each day...there starts a love so heavenly.......... beautiful poem...10/10

0 0 Reply
Kris Smith 31 January 2009

That is a beautiful write Fay so well put together and full of happiness thanks Chris 10 ++

0 0 Reply
Tsira Goge 31 January 2009

Very beautiful, and gentle the poems, expensive... 10x10 Thank you, Fay Tsira

0 0 Reply
Juneil Sechico 12 February 2009

Nice imagination gal! mwahhh!

0 0 Reply

thats the kiss I am talking about. perfect everytime

0 0 Reply
Ann Beard 02 February 2009

Out of this world Fay beautiful. Kind regards Ann

0 0 Reply
Fiona Davidson 31 January 2009

This is sheer beauty Fay....thank you...Fi

0 0 Reply
Viola Grey 31 January 2009

I love that this goes deeper than simple awareness...if I could astral travel, I know exactly who I'd aim a kiss at...nice write Fay.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
Close
Error Success