An Effect Of War Poem by Luwi Habte

An Effect Of War

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no body is to win
no body is to gain

there is nothing sweet
it is not addicted as habit

no one shines
nothing hides

each and everybody is to be hurtled
every soldier is to be suffered

scary life nobody knows when to die
all of a sudden you can lye

no one is to win
in any kind of war! ! !

stop war! let it stop ever and after!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nathaniel Flying Owl 14 January 2010

It was striaght to the point, which in this case was really good. You are an excellent.

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Shashendra Amalshan 21 June 2009

now that's a work of a great poet indeed! ! ! ! hey did you read Ashraful sir's poems... his ones are bit like this too..... well he is of course a genius! ! ! but you are great too 10++ with lots of love shan

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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 June 2009

'noone is to win in any kind of war! ! ! stop war! let it stop ever and after! ' Marvelous. Who will against whom and why? 10+++

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