An Empty Street Poem by Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)

An Empty Street

Rating: 5.0


It were as if a storm
had blown away all the happiness,
killings every night
Screaming young kids
with so much fear storming their tears

It was the empty street
that had no love,
crime the valuable fashion for life,
you would bet the world has end
But no it was street full death in blood

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Swetha Vanakayalapati 23 June 2012

a heart with no love............or caress.........a street full of death...............

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 June 2012

I do not think that this kind of street exists anywhere, because humanity is our inborn character and even if we live in the utmost poverty stricken and crime prone areas, there are a few kind souls that we can find there..

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Jacques S Mateya 24 June 2012

Absolutely beautiful words...keep them coming

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Captain Cur 24 June 2012

The inner and outer manifestations of hatred and crime. Very poignant!

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Nontobeko Dlamini 24 June 2012

A people without passion for humanity...'An empty street'.

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 23 June 2012

Fascinating point of view.

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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

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South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
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