An Epiphany In The Car Poem by Almedia Knight-Oliver

An Epiphany In The Car



The gathering dark clouds give me and eerie feeling, that
spreads over the blue sky, putting me in a pensive mood.
Out of the black clouds rain poured as the clouds
slowly secedes from the rest..leaving open view of the
silver disk going down slowly, and setting in the west.
My eyes were overcome by the flaring orange and red horizon as I watched the sun falling into his fiery arms, and I in his!

Looking into a face covered with hints of grey hair covering the side,
and whispering 'I love you.' All the while laying gently to the side, as drops of joy fell down his face, and in harmony with the raindrops on the window pane.

My Childhood days were recalled from a far away distant:
Walking out the sun right into the cool rain and hearing the
raindrops on Momma's window pane, and the familiar sound of
the belt whipping tune:
'I told you…beat, beat, beat...not to play in the rain…beat, beat, beat…
'OUCH, those lyrics continued hours it seemed.
Still, we sat in the car looking out on the rain feeling
the long ago hot sunrises, still feeling all years of Momma's missed presences!

Closing distance between then and now..I'm still in awe of
the blazing sunset to my right but, cannot stop my eyes from raining
down right and left my left or, my future-self from pondering my own sunset.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My husband and I took a drive to the promenade over looking Manhattan, one of the 5 borough that makes up New York city, and before we gathered ourselves, it started to pour rain.We sat in the car for a while to wait for the rain to let up, before getting out to sit.
After a while, I saw a beautiful sunset in the distant sky to my right. I took a couple pictures which were magnificent. Later, a deeper meaning appeared...hence my poem.
-

By Almedia Knight-Oliver

June 19,2012
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 22 June 2012

This wonderful descriptive poem is a real epiphany-the nature is hiding its mysticism inside..thank you for sharing...

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success