An Exceptional Feeling When I'M With You... Poem by Neha Aradhye

An Exceptional Feeling When I'M With You...

Rating: 5.0


You have a bizarre tactic,
to win my heart with a phenomenal magic...
for you make my day a melodious chime,
& our chemistry a perfect rhyme,

You're something that I can't live without,
You showed me our future layout...

You made my life a joyful ride,
the trails long & wide,
tagged new waves & tides,
and developed swings & slides...

It feels so wonderful to be with you,
serene, beautiful & cherished too........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 21 June 2009

Lovely rhyming, beautiful poem 10

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Brishti Mazumdar 11 June 2009

It feels so wonderful to be with you, serene, beautiful & cherished too........ ...loved to go thru the poem...10+..Brishti Mazumdar ...May I request you to go thru my new poem'She Walks In Beauty'?

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Dhanesh Aradhye 07 June 2009

simplicity all over.... beautiful & cherished words... :)

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