An Exquisite Hurt Poem by Uriah Hamilton

An Exquisite Hurt

Rating: 4.2


Love is exciting
Like Wild West gunfire
Friday night,
Tender mouths kissing
To a heartbeat rhythm
Pulsating body sexual heat!

I’m going to leap
Like a wild mountain goat
Over obstacles of regret
Until you place your hand
On my thrilling chest
And forget
Everybody else!

I’m electrified
When you
Take off your skirt
Or tug on my shirt,
Fantasy experiment
Crashes all my senses
With an exquisite hurt!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 05 July 2005

oooo....I felt that one. :)

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Joy Vanderhelm 17 November 2005

I could feel the enrgy and the frenzy in this poem. I liked this very much. You have a really awesome grasp on description.

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Marcy Jarvis 25 September 2005

I love the energy in this one, Uriah.

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Raynette Eitel 19 July 2005

The first stanza carries the excitement...and your images are good. I love the title. Raynette

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Adriana Cruz 15 July 2005

why do you place exclamation marks on everything? interesting...

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Kathleen Paul-Flanagan 14 July 2005

Good one! I really liked the first stanza best....

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