.. An Eye For Eye.... Poem by Eyan Desir

YOU EXPRESS AN UNIVERSAL TRUTH OF NATURAL LAW TODAY YOU ARE STRONG YOU DO EVERYTHING TOMORROW YOU HAVE TO PAY BACK YOUR WRONGDOINGS ULTIMATELY JUNGLE LAW GIVES NOTHING ONLY BLOOD--- FULL OF BLOOD NICELY WRITTEN.I GIVE YOU10/10

The man! ! this is also nice piece love the rhytm well done poet luwi

you all ready know what i'm going to say...will eyan great poem..and its true the enemy will try to steal your happiness...and god will return it twice as much what you had..love how you express your self in diffrenet ways good job..

I love the way you expressed the anger within, after all it's in the human nature and that's what makes the poem nice cos it seems to me so natural. keep the good work!

I love this one. ive been writing for about 2 or 3 yrs but never thought anyone cared about how i felt so i never showed it

great write. both sadness and vengence in equal balance put together superbly by an excellent poet. it holds much truth in it for so many injustices done to others. i love it! again my friend a wonderful work of true emotion and art.! 10's all of the way. Jen

I absolutely love this poem, it has strong feeling. I love how you wrote it with so much emotion<33

Eye for an eye yes what a vengeful wrath a thing that can tear nothing but the heart

If only i can say this to the people who shade my sky with gray... 10 Eyan...

Seems to be its pay back time my dear friend............well done with great rhymes and touching moving monologues! ! !