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Hamid Kareem (2/25/2008 7:28:00 AM)
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i really like the poem. tis like a world everyone would like to live in but which in reality is impossible. thats why it all disappears with the pasing gleam of morning. the poem is reallly wonderful and the imagery.
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NVN Nguyen-er (2/9/2008 1:12:00 AM)
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love your work, you're very talented, and thanks for the email
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~samiha~ Issacs (1/16/2008 11:55:00 PM)
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This is a beautiful poem that contains amazing imagery and eye-catching details. I loved it!
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Raveendran . (11/13/2007 7:33:00 PM)
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'a cream cat with snow white claws' - happy seeing him Sonnet.
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Jade Murphy (11/13/2007 1:12:00 PM)
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This is an amazing poem! ! The images indeed are fantastic! ! ! I love the lines talking about Nature's creations from the snowflakes, and spring! ! Thats my favourite time of the year! !
xxxxx
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Alison Cassidy (11/12/2007 10:06:00 PM)
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Your creamy dream has a real 'Alice in Wonderland' feel about it. It is indeed fascinating to read about those images that appear out of the ether when the eyes are zig-zagging in REM sleep. Your last line is superb. 'But all were shattered when the light of dawn fell on the tip of my nose.' Lighthearted and optimistic verse. Love, Allie nxxxx
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Tash Walsh (11/5/2007 1:21:00 AM)
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thats extraordinary dreams are awesome and r great to write about sad not all dreams can be like this
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Penny Hemans (11/4/2007 2:44:00 AM)
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super Sonnet! love dreams like this; we should write them down as you have done because they are so special; thanks Sonnet xxxPenny
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Gabby Bryan (11/3/2007 10:33:00 PM)
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i love it.
it's amazing and well written.
while i was reading this poem i was listening to this wonderful song that seemed to go so well with your poem :)
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