Treasure Island

Kranthi Pothineni

An Interior

Hey my dear soul
My dear aching heart
Let me tell you both
Few words I know
Which you too may know

Many notable winners
In our history had met
With heartbreaking obstacles
But they refused to stop
By those defeats in life

Many strong hearts
Have many scars
With deeper cuts
Those cuts and scars
Had made them brave

To be the one
In a million
Is not so easy
It’s a hardest path
It spills lot of blood

Finally if you know
There is always one
Who keeps watching?
Then trust him and move
He will show you justice

Submitted: Thursday, July 02, 2009

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (4/26/2010 1:14:00 PM)

    ‘Many strong hearts/Have many scars’

    Because its feeling heart
    Not blunt one with rhino skin thickness
    Excellently poemed.
    Voted 10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Antonio Liao (1/25/2010 6:40:00 PM)

    “A clings of victory breathe”.... the power of the heart that brings the soul to reach the glorious hope to fight......the stamina that conquer all the pain for honor and sprinkles hope with a hope....very reflective write. God bless...a 10 +++ (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (7/15/2009 11:23:00 AM)

    your beloved BAPU...Ghandiji...insrtantly comes to mind
    a great icon...larger than life size...dont make em any more like they used to

    your split view is endearing seemingly seeing urself l; evitating above soul and heart which u see sepeartely...fresh idea

    very well written
    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Janell Cressman (7/2/2009 12:14:00 PM)

    Brilliant write! ! ! ! ! ! such a well expressed poem, if you have a strong heart, you have a stronger person. if things were always easy then know one would learn anything,

    amazing poem! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Shashendra Amalshan (7/2/2009 9:41:00 AM)

    this is an inspirational piece friend! ! ! good one for me! ! ! well expressed too friend! !
    thanks for these words of wisdom! ! 10++

    with love
    shan (Report) Reply

  • surya . (7/2/2009 4:09:00 AM)

    very interesting. verygood write. last para is interesting
    surya (Report) Reply

  • rago rago (7/2/2009 1:49:00 AM)

    very good write then move trust him who will should you jutice....... the inner consciousness which willl show the path...... ushering in good write.... (Report) Reply

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