An Internet Relation Poem by ahmed abomahfouz

An Internet Relation

Rating: 3.6


Through the internet
love haunted me again
inhabited my arteries
and congested my veins
i wanted to stop it.
who can't stop the rain?

may I seem insane
to translate the electric
and turn it romantic
but signals are electric
in any heart and brain

and when it is Love
no one can explain

and when it is my heart
can one queen contain

and when the queen is you
So why you refrain

i want to ask you date
but seeing you a real
might make me stammer
scared from that matter
and from my heart flutter

i want to meet you
only to inspire
and as a step for life
for its entire

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Whispering Rose 23 April 2011

I love this poem, i guess many people could relate to it, me encluded at some point i like the way you gather some ordinary words and form such extraordinary expressions these lines i found fascinating 'may I seem insane to translate the electric and turn it romantic and when it is Love no one can explain'

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Merna Ibrahim 15 June 2011

Nice topic to talk about! So, Why not...love could come through the internet, through anything..but you have to meet her more than once, to be sure from your feelings..I enjoyed the poem! Thanks for sharing =)

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Basma Amir 22 March 2012

Great Work! ! ! ! ! ! and very nice poem! ! !

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Binish Cd 17 January 2012

after reading the minds of people, this fine piece of work was written..................a great work..........

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 15 December 2011

Wow! great poem well written...im sure many people can relate to it.

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Robinson Helela 08 December 2011

ur poem is simple and loving.i lyk the flow too! please check out my poems.

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Elena Sandu 18 July 2011

may I seem insane to translate the electric and turn it romantic but signals are electric in any heart and brain very nice written I wish to clap my hands, we can't control own heart if she wants love to spread.. but even if broken has to keep loving as once in the heart love must keep there, to grow.. Thank you for share, loved it.

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