An Obscure Artist Poem by Naledi Sibisi

An Obscure Artist

Rating: 4.7


I am an artist.
An obscure artist.
See, I was named with intention; the intention to shine
Brighter than the billions of stars in my infinite sky.
My infinite sky. It’s mine. I own it.
And no other tenant has the right to enthrone it.
I am an artist.
An obscure artist.
I may glance at a vacant canvas.
Then
Paint it with words.
Write down pictures.
Scribble songs.
And draw odes.
I am an artist.
An obscure artist.
I mould my character daily.
I add
I erase.
Conceal blunders with clay
That’s exactly how I arrived at this place.
I am an artist
Let me explain,
Perfection one cannot attain.
But
I seek it in each piece
Thus each piece is incomplete.
See, I am an artist.
Highly obscure.
One who was named with intention; the intention to shine
Brighter than the billions of stars in my infinite sky.
Infinite sky. Hand crafted for me.
Then embellished by me.
For I am an artist.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naledi Sibisi 17 August 2011

Thank you SO much Romeo. I really do appreciate it. You have definitely encouraged me to keep going. Watch this space! x

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Jasbir Chatterjee 04 August 2012

This is the most wonderful definition of an artist, I must say...

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Captain Cur 04 August 2012

Yes you are an artist that shines and your canvas is not empty buy filled with insight, integrity and star shine! The Captain salutes you!

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Godfrey Morris 04 August 2012

This is beautiful. Well said, Well written.

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Romeo Della Valle 16 August 2011

Impressive! A well penned and poignant write that clearly shows that poetry runs in your blood! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your talented poetic writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Michelle Claus 04 August 2014

Admirable poem. I really appreciate the form.

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Seamus O Brian 04 August 2014

Thank you for so eloquently capturing that elusive void. Thank you for sharing your beautiful piece.

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Gajanan Mishra 04 August 2014

hand crafted for me - infinite sky, thanks,

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Susmit Panda 04 August 2014

You are really good, Naledi! Please, please read my poems. Awaiting your comments. Susmit Panda

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Joseph Poewhit 04 August 2013

Your yard, no one can copy your style or art - really.

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