An Old Man Poem by Sumanta Roy

An Old Man



On my way
I saw an old man
Was walking,
A heavy bag
He was holding.
On that day
The sun was shining
Over the head heavily.
From every side
Warm wind was blowing.
On the way
There was some trees,
On the branches
Birds were taking rest,
I was looking those thing.
On the way
Suddenly, he stoped
And put on his body,
On the way.
Some people were gathering
They were just looking,
Not to do anything.
At the same
A thief stoled
his bag, what a shame.
We are so rough
Though we are human being.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emmanuel Damilola Adeyemo 27 October 2011

tight ending man! kip movin

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Vipins Puthooran 19 October 2011

The words that you placed orderly and had a good flow of lines.. But you could have written a lot of things about that old man and what you written here were excellent.. A good poem!

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