An Old Windmill Poem by David Harris

An Old Windmill

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An old windmill stands on a hill;
it once stood proud
as the wind swept round its sails.
Now deserted,
tattered and torn
a shell of its former self,
a relic of a bygone day.
A home now
where wild animals play
and lovers shelter
from a midnight storm.
Forlorn it looks down
from the hill,
ragged with a broken sail
that old windmill.

12 April 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patrick McFarland 13 April 2008

I like poems that can transport the reader to a particular place and time. This is a good one.

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Coach Roth 13 April 2008

Not only windmills...nice write...Coach

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JoAnn McGrath 13 April 2008

I have to agree with Patrick.....I love history, nature, simplicity...and I can feel all that in this little one.....one of your top 10's David

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Ernestine Northover 13 April 2008

How smart they must have been in their day. There is something ageless about Windmills though. Lovely expressive poem. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Guy Lip-more 09 November 2012

You capture images in you words, very good write.

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Mamta Agarwal 25 April 2008

a chance find. very simple, but so true. old fashioned things had a charm of their own. nostalgic.10 on that David.

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Alison Cassidy 25 April 2008

There is something rather dignified about your old windmill with its tattered sails and melancholy persona. It always fascinates me how objects take on board the emotional trappings of those who perceive them. You see your subject with a poet's eye, David. Lovely piece. Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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David Desantis 21 April 2008

very very good imagery on this! I wish we had more old windmills to check out, just these new crazy huge steal ones...great job

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 17 April 2008

Not many left these days, love looking through our Heritage of bygone days... Andy 10

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