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(07 April 1950 / London)

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An Ordinary Day

The joggers running around the lake
Looked as if they were about to give birth.
They say no pain no gain but they were
Obviously stressed out to say the least.

My exercise was throwing the ball for Clara
Who retrieved it and brought it back to me.
This routine we did every morning for the
Past year, except when it rained.

The lake was kidney shaped and was one
Mile round and almost flat except for the
Grassy mounds that were raised covered
With bushes and ash trees and silver birch.

Joggers, dog walkers and the elderly plodded
Around trying not to bump into each other
With a ‘Morning’ or ‘Afternoon’ as the day dictated.
Even young mums with pushchairs graced the day.

There was nothing special about the lake, in fact
It was ordinary as lakes go with swans, ducks and
Geese flapping about with coots and moorhens
In their wake but it was popular with folk.

But this is the thing with life, we take the ordinary
And turn it into something special, a cause celeb.
And the moments we share with strangers can
Be moments to savour in the course of the day.

Submitted: Monday, July 08, 2013
Edited: Monday, July 08, 2013


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  • Kanniappan Kanniappan (9/26/2013 11:25:00 PM)

    Hi David,
    I feel as if I am walking round the lake. I wondered by seeing the local British (While I went to Reading, UK) or Americans (while I went to Seattle) wishing 'Hi' with a smile. Nice poem.

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  • Kanniappan Kanniappan (8/6/2013 10:01:00 PM)

    I understand a poet can write, even an ordinary morning walk in a park, as a very nice poem.
    Kindly go through my poems as per links given below:

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/thames-beautiful-thames/
    http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/watching-swans-from-caversham-bridge/

    I had been to READING UK during 2006, stayed with my son in Swansea road, reading.

  • Sian Sullivan (7/20/2013 2:09:00 PM)

    That is exactly how it is!

  • Ken E Hall (7/16/2013 2:19:00 AM)

    Different slant on an ordinary day which as the poem goes on the ending explains it all and the skill of the writer,
    nice to read...regards

  • Cambridge Keenan (7/12/2013 5:58:00 PM)

    this is so right on David...meeting new people, doing kind deeds for others....just being in someone's presence can be a big deal for many are lonely, have no family or abandoned...our word can be so cruel and vicious...I see it getting colder and colder....like the ice age is here....it makes me sad

  • Geetha Jayakumar (7/12/2013 9:56:00 AM)

    Good write....We take the ordinary and turn it into something special....Well said...

  • Lorraine Colon (7/9/2013 12:39:00 PM)

    Good feelings radiate from this poem, but especially the last stanza. Just a smile or kind word from a stranger can have such a great impact, not just on the day, but sometimes on our lives.

  • Kavya . (7/9/2013 4:29:00 AM)

    rightly said, in life an ordinary thing can be turned special by sharing some moments even with strangers! a gud write...

  • Heather Wilkins (7/8/2013 6:17:00 PM)

    sounds like a very nice day David. even running can be fun.

  • Paul Brookes (7/8/2013 10:16:00 AM)

    No such thing as ordinary as your poem is proof of Great write 10/10 BB =: OD

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