Peter Daniel Phiri

Rookie - 22 Points (21/06/1989 / Kadoma)

An Orphan Unto Love - Poem by Peter Daniel Phiri

You say you are an orphan unto life, ..
But I'm an orphan unto love.
You refuse to give me another chance,
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Comments about An Orphan Unto Love by Peter Daniel Phiri

  • John Brown (10/2/2012 9:07:00 AM)


    A sad, but very well written poem Peter. (Report) Reply

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  • Babatunde Aremu (9/22/2012 12:57:00 AM)


    Great poem from emotional feeling. Keep writing (Report) Reply

  • (9/11/2012 2:40:00 PM)


    nice sad poem -thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (9/1/2012 2:32:00 PM)


    A heartfelt plea, a lovely write. (Report) Reply

  • Abdallah Gamal (9/1/2012 2:19:00 PM)


    Excellent write! Very emotional, as it comes truly from the heart, it's like a great piece of art, well coloured, and well written, I take my hate off for your far imagination, keep up the good work, and settings will be alright, hope you the best wishes my brother. (Report) Reply

  • Kasia Fedyk (8/23/2012 9:56:00 AM)


    very beautiful Peter! I love everything about your poem it flows with truth and soul like an invisible force of love and love only. It is beautiful! This is what I feel when I read your poem Peter. (Report) Reply

  • (8/23/2012 7:12:00 AM)


    hope-find happiness-----fine ending (Report) Reply








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