An Unknown Girl Poem by Dhanesh (trying to be) poet

An Unknown Girl



(saw a sweet girl in bus... she was interesting so tried to describe what she did)

I wonder what you were upto,
I wonder what you think,
saw u talking on your mobile,
saying i'll be there in a blink.

sweet and cute was your face,
smile all around lips with gloss,
conductor gave you a coin,
and amusingly, you made a toss.

some song stroked on your mind,
started singing it, just a bit loud,
lost so much in it that you..you girl
forgot that you are in a crowd.

now even u wonder what you were upto,
when unintended but our eyes looked thru,
curious but still singing the song,
i guess you wished if there was just you.

aware and alert you looked around,
now you held the mobile to your ear,
you a music lover... still kept singing
and me just kept listening.. both with a cheer.

- -
Dhanesh Aradhye
(29May2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neha Aradhye 01 June 2009

is that the same girl you told me about once? ? nice work, dude! ! ! i liked it....very sweet & cute! ! ! ;)

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Vinod Kumar 30 May 2009

Interesting, first dropp of the rain dew, it makes somany things internally us that really make one a poet, you did it thanks, dear,10++

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Reshma Ramesh 30 May 2009

well penned...................

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Keshav Prasad 29 May 2009

nice

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