An Unsent Wish Poem by Akhtar Jawad

An Unsent Wish

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I remember the flowers,
We plucked from the gardens,
I remember butterflies,
We jointly collected,
I remember the festivals,
We celebrated and enjoyed,
I remember the songs,
We listened to on the radio,
I remember the games,
We played in the streets,
I remember the rivers,
That met like lovers,
I remember the school,
We studied whereat,
I remember the showers,
We jointly enjoyed.

And I remember the girl,
We watched every day,
In the morning to school,
In afternoon back to home,
Every day when she passed,
From the road we stood at,
We commented with a sigh,
The colors have gone,
The fragrance has gone,
And left behind,
A thirst to see again,
What a joint love affair!

And I still remember,
We liked her so much,
Yes, we loved her jointly,
She was a piece of beauty,
Not sexy at all,
A model of innocence,
A divine lovely charm,
I don't know what,
There was something in her,
That was holy and pious.

Years have now passed,
I left that place,
However for a few years,
We exchanged the letters,
Then a tragedy of hate,
Resulting in a war,
Increased the distances,
And correspondence was over.

Time changes Eve,
Time changes Adam,
But a friend never changes,
I saw your lovely photographs,
On a website,
With your graceful wife,
Your children and grandchildren,
I recognized your wife,
You appeared to me,
Like two holy rivers,
That ultimately met,
With seven commitments,
And the hidden third river,
Wishes you dear,
A happy life,
With a lovely wife!

Saturday, September 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: wish
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
An unsent wish often becomes a poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 06 September 2014

Happiness, tragedy, love, hatred, virtue, vice// Nature has taught us as per the situation but we tie with one end only..Unsent wish..again the sprought of love again hatred or misfortune life is an image of multi faces love to the poem but why separation // old friend gold friend...rolled friend many many times thought dies into the lap of our own mind ..

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Md Asadullah 07 September 2014

Nostalgic poem, but this is how life is, thanks for sharing this feeling with us!

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Salini Nair 07 September 2014

a nostalgic write...............like it

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V P Mahur 07 September 2014

Dear bro, very emotional and sweet description. the memories of youth always pass before the eyes like a movie and i feel my heart tumbling with a kind of gloom thinking that the time can not come again though we wish it to come. great write. only you can do this.

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Ruma Chaudhuri 07 September 2014

Beautiful poem. A nice story too. But the ending is also nicely penned poet's inner pain of love. Very nice. You are a good story teller too. I always like your poems.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 June 2019

A wonderful, sweet and touching poem. It expresses in beautiful detail the happy memories gathered yesteryears. So beautifully conveyed and crafted. Loved reading it. It made me remember my friends.

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Khalid Saifullah 27 October 2017

A nice emotional poem...........................................................

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Savita Tyagi 15 September 2014

Such a lovely display of emotions. It reflects purity of a friendship that made two young people enjoy life together. That beautiful time stays still in memories yet future life is dealt with no bitterness. A most beautiful poem. Loved reading it. Thank you for sharing it.

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Amitava Sur 09 September 2014

A lovely remembrance of the early happy days. World may change with the change of time, sweet memories remain deep inside the heart. They are are the real achievement of life as an ever blooming lotus, unblemished, , unhurt. Enjoyed and thanks for sharing this fact

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Valsa George 07 September 2014

Travelled through those beautiful days of your boyhood..! . Such experiences are not just personal but almost universal! Now when we look back it is a lovely memory! 'What a joint love affair! ' Love this line the most! How true....! Without being possessive, having a kind of crush and celebrating it as a group affair! Enjoyed the poem altogether!

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