Ben Paynter

Freshman - 876 Points (Midwest)

And Her Face And Her Words And Her Promises - Poem by Ben Paynter

she says that my face
is the last she sees
before sleep takes her,
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (4/3/2016 4:41:00 PM)


    I say I need to go
    I am tired
    and her face
    and her words
    and her promises
    will not let me
    rest. your strength in love is fascinating. May God bless you to find peace in love. thank you. tony
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  • Bernard Snyder (9/26/2014 1:18:00 PM)


    Well Ben, I do hope you got your rest eventually. Congrats' on such a well-deserved vote as 'Poem of the day'. Poem was excellent! I gave a 10' for this one! (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee (9/26/2013 11:32:00 PM)


    It's a nice poem...both of you seem to be restlessly in love...Hope the strength of your love brings peace and tranquility in your life...congrats for being Poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (9/26/2013 10:32:00 PM)


    Beautiful words Ben, congratulations (Report) Reply

  • (9/26/2013 4:13:00 PM)


    Whoah. The unrest. (Report) Reply

  • Erika Wingo (9/28/2012 8:28:00 PM)


    This is so beautifully written! I am in love with this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Solmon Jejemore Gbemiga (9/28/2012 5:10:00 AM)


    Pretty good dis is, love has its own way of doing things. (Report) Reply

  • Kristien Blend (9/27/2012 12:28:00 AM)


    Beautiful words, a truly lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • (9/26/2012 8:23:00 PM)


    Not to burst bubbles, but I think it's kind of odd. And maybe a little derivative. (Report) Reply

  • (9/26/2012 11:19:00 AM)


    This is the kind of poem I like to read, and read again and let it speak with its own words to me. (Report) Reply

  • Tim Stensloff (9/26/2012 10:52:00 AM)


    What a shame it is that this poem, which has been on the site since 2006, just now receives attention. Man, this is a real poem. I'd likely give my pretentions to write a piece this emotive and sense-rendering. I hope this poem doesn't wallow in obscurity. It has too much soul for that. (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan (9/26/2012 9:56:00 AM)


    Lindo, the way you express your love. Pure and simple! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Kelvin Owusu (9/26/2012 3:43:00 AM)


    Beautifully written this is a great piece of poetry (Report) Reply

  • (1/12/2009 7:59:00 PM)


    Ben-

    in stride here, i think. not blind, adolescent love, but a thoughtful, very adult mulling of ideas - as careful to examine the meanings of the loved one as ones own.

    brooding, yet an underpinned lyricism.

    now we're cooking.

    bernie
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  • (9/28/2007 2:24:00 PM)


    beautiful lyrics-chilling (Report) Reply

  • (8/13/2007 12:13:00 PM)


    this was really good (Report) Reply

  • (7/11/2007 2:03:00 AM)


    Great write, you show so much experience in this piece. You are a talented writer. Keep writing. Love this piece! (Report) Reply

  • (6/9/2007 2:21:00 AM)


    Ciao, Ben!
    Simple yet speaks volumes.
    I think often a great poem is precisely that-compact & clear.
    Love your stuff...
    aaa
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  • (4/21/2007 1:08:00 AM)


    i am madly in love with this. its beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • (12/17/2006 6:24:00 PM)


    Your poem is painfully beautiful That is all that I can say the rest stays in my heart -Pia (Report) Reply










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