Daniel Richards

Rookie (09-11-1982 / London, England)

*and It Was Her That Made Me Surrender Part 2* - Poem by Daniel Richards

Her taste, what an other worldly pleasure was
All I ever could’ve wished for an unearthly treasure
And it was too me that she surrendered

I lay, with my hands upon her, caressing her, she leans
And turns to me a little closer, to say I’ve found you, your
Everything, I’ve ever searched for

And to each we surrendered…..

These stares that fall silently in-between us are emotions
Feeling things out, as the lamp flickers in the bedroom,
An unearthly treasure now on top filling my headroom

This stage one of cotton and feathered springs,
Become one, attachment to one body, from
Two separate beings sweating as it seals

The heart, mind the soul surrendered to each other
Love life and peace of heart are now rendered

One touch was all it needed, and I feel swiftly into the pool
Her face, staring at me now one of true amazement,
Even though im not sexy, her love for me is now her life’s rule

I'm lost up in whirl, soothed by her subtle little whisper,
She’s calming me down, soon back on the pavement,
Her hand in mine my heart in hers there’s no emotion absent

And it was her that made me surrender but to her,
It was me to which she choose surrender
Sun and moon now shine together
For to us we’d forever and always surrender


Comments about *and It Was Her That Made Me Surrender Part 2* by Daniel Richards

  • Rookie - 59 Points Brian Jani (5/5/2014 7:02:00 AM)

    I like part 2 better (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Anna jonson (10/7/2008 8:41:00 AM)

    She’s calming me down, soon back on the pavement,
    Her hand in mine my heart in hers there’s no emotion absent
    woooooooooooow
    i like the final part......................goooooooooooooooood poem...maybe the best (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 7, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, February 27, 2009


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