And Melt Into Nothingness Poem by Nathan Barkley

And Melt Into Nothingness



Gazing within my own brain
Tearing everything down without shame
I'm going insane
I can't hold the voices in
Falling with the rain
If you can stop my world
With alcohol
I invite you in
Just don't scream during the night
The nightmare's give me a fright
You can join me into the unknown
Don't you know
It's fake everything that i have shown

Tonight is a night of masquerade
Going into where even the lights are afraid
Lets dance and crash till the next day
Love locks our freedom in
Don't remind us of sin
I watch you flow in and out
Your hair bouncing
Your eyes hypnotizing
This is unbelievable
What i didn't notice i was walking
Into your heart
Into my own heart
Our bodies excited with this restlessness
Until we become one
And melt into nothingness.
And melt into nothingness.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Søren Valentine 24 March 2014

Hmm. This poem is very good. It is only the second one I've read and I already know you are a great writer. Therefore, you have much potential. I'll probably find the answer to this enquiry as I read on, but have you tried writing without rhyming? I think you'd be good at it. But what do I know? Thanks for sharing. Sorry if I seem too abrasive. I'm just honest... not to cause offence. Anyway, sigues escribiendo! þakka þér!

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