And So We Take The Twisted Path To Town Poem by Ben Partenay

And So We Take The Twisted Path To Town

Rating: 5.0


We walked upon the mountains in a fog
The town below sat covered in alone
While mountain birds sat tired from their singing
We tried to find a little bit of home

But I don’t think we’ll find it here today
The clouds are thick; the earth is wrapped with frost
The patterns in the stone spell little poems
They rhyme until their meaning has been lost

And so we take the twisted path to town
In hopes that love will pass while heading down

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 13 December 2006

Very nice lyrical write. I love your titles. They are very original. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Bernard Henrie 12 January 2009

Ben- this one i like much better. also the title of the one in which the moon turns to stone...more reality but still a wistful longing. good. bernie

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Rani Turton 19 August 2008

A poem deep with meaning, lovely to read. A real pleasure.

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Don Mcwilliams 04 March 2008

Very nice, Ben. Love the title. Don

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Marcia Morris 11 July 2007

Good writing skills. You have a such a great style of writing, while I read this piece it's as if you were reciting the words before me. Great imagery.

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 26 December 2006

I really like this one Ben... it's from the heart

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