And Still The World Spins Poem by Alexzia Ferdinand

And Still The World Spins

Rating: 5.0


i'm alone now says
the heavy thickened silence
echoing around me
quickening my pace

the clouds move on says
the gently padding snow
covering my footsteps
softening this face

the moon continues rising says
the beams in reverence
it cannot, will not stop
the stars, it's simple tears

time refuses ceasing says
the hollow, bitter ticking
the clock within admitting
his deepest, lonely fears

And still the World spins
on it's dizzying track
filling in the spaces
and never looking back

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 24 August 2007

I like this poem too, give you 10 also. Great metaphors, forward moving sensory footsteps. Wonderful job. Adeline

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Sandra Fowler 07 December 2006

The movement of time is as sure as the movement of shadows or the rising and setting of the sun. Cheers for your rich imagination. A very original mind is at work here. Warm regards, Sandra

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Suzan Gumush 06 December 2006

I like this poem give you 10. best wishes suzan

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Alfredo Jacques 06 December 2006

great poem and I love the line'i'm alone now says the heavy thickened silence'

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