Kumud Ranjan

Rookie (8th July / India)

And....Tears Smiled - Poem by Kumud Ranjan

the sun was very hot
A kid of four was playing outside
She jumped and fell down
Injured she was, cried
Tears streamed on her soft face

Her father came, picked her up
Consoled, offered a candy and said
“You rocked! You hurt the ground! ”
Her face shone in happiness, felt pride
She stopped crying... and tears smiled


Comments about And....Tears Smiled by Kumud Ranjan

  • (12/28/2009 8:58:00 AM)


    really it's innocence at its best....
    such a cute poem...
    luved it...
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  • Aastha Uppal (12/23/2009 11:44:00 PM)


    innocence at its best..
    after reading this i just feel that why can't we be like the child-why can't we be hurt one moment and then the other second just forget all of it and be cheerful.
    great piece of work.
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  • Aastha Uppal (12/23/2009 11:39:00 PM)


    innocence at its best! ! ! !
    after reading this i just wish that even nowwe all be like the child- why can't one moment we are hurt and the next second we forget it and can be cheerful

    g
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  • (12/16/2009 8:18:00 AM)


    A LOVELY POEM! ! !
    I fully agree with Jen.....this poem brought back the sweet memories of my childhood too......
    thnxxx 2 u
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  • (11/14/2009 9:45:00 AM)


    oh my god! ! what a lovely piece of writing from you! ! loved the idea and loved the poem! ! thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • (10/16/2009 2:52:00 AM)


    joust that keep the experienced of life wonderful to remember.....rated as jade
    ...a poem brings genuinely of what is life....God bless...a 10 +++
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  • (10/9/2009 11:35:00 PM)


    short to the point but no part of it can be said to be simple. this is a sweet tenerly thought out poem that is well written and wonderfully expressed in so few words. it teaches us all it doesn't take many elaborate words to touch someones heart through a poem. i can honestly say this poem touched me very deeply and brought back sweet memeories of my childhood and my father's determination to pick me up and kiss away my scrapes and bruises and encourage me to be strong and try again. this is going into my favorites definately. you are a wonderfull poet Kumud and i look forward to continuing to read your work. deserves nothing less than a 10++++++++, my friend.
    Jen
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  • (9/27/2009 10:27:00 AM)


    LOVELY THEME.......LOVELY POEM...............LOVELY WRITER (Report) Reply

  • (9/24/2009 4:30:00 PM)


    And tears smile what a wonderful poem (Report) Reply

  • Indira Renganathan (9/24/2009 11:06:00 AM)


    An anecdote sweetly rendered.....lovely (Report) Reply

  • (9/22/2009 5:30:00 AM)


    theme well described....nice work.... (Report) Reply

  • (9/21/2009 4:31:00 AM)


    *smiles*...beautiful! and a perfect 10 for the effort! - the poem so simple so meaningful and so pleasant...thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • (9/21/2009 3:42:00 AM)


    you are twenty one...but i feel there is still a kid in you...very much fond of its father...
    nice work...refreshing...thanks...10
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  • (9/21/2009 3:40:00 AM)


    a sweet poem discribing how a little consolation from the loved one gives great happiness.a good write. (Report) Reply

  • (9/21/2009 3:27:00 AM)


    good poem i like how it made me picture what was happening! (Report) Reply

  • C. P. Sharma (9/20/2009 9:56:00 PM)


    A million dollar recollection, great poetry in itself but superly penned.
    CP
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  • (9/18/2009 3:53:00 PM)


    Nice. Who has not consoled a crying child with these very words. (Report) Reply

  • (9/17/2009 1:17:00 AM)


    lovely poem this was.. (Report) Reply

  • (9/16/2009 12:45:00 PM)


    Bravo! ! ! great job! satisfactorily =) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 16, 2009



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