And The Rain Poem by Daniel Wittfoth

And The Rain

Rating: 4.8


Smoke circles in the air
from a cigarette left laying there

There is a tear
caught between-holding on-letting go

And the rain
it dances on the windowpane
Thunder echoes
like the slamming of the door-a clinched fist
Lightning flashes
reflections off a shattered mirror
Showing all-you fight to deny
cut lip-bruises-black eye
That whispered-inner voice
screaming-I told you so
And so and so
it comes and goes
Moments like this
fading now-already somehow
Like it never really happened again
until the next time
And the rain
it dances on the windowpane

A heart is torn
left on that long road-called sorrow

And the rain
it dances on the windowpane
Thunder echoes
like the slamming of the door-a clinched fist
Lightning flashes
reflections off a shattered mirror
Showing all-you fight to deny
cut lip-bruises-black eye
That whispered-inner voice
screaming-I told you so
And so and so
it comes and goes
Moments like this
fading now-already somehow
Like it never really happened again
until the next time
And the rain
it dances on the windowpane...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gone with the wind 30 June 2008

Wow what a piece. Its having so much behind the window pane and the shattered glass. Its framed so symbolically. Superb!

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I agree with Lylyanna. A powerfully well-written piece. I'm glad I got a chance to read this.

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Lylyanna Pilewski 09 November 2006

wow a very powerful peice great job. Lylyanna

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