And Then There Was You Poem by Les Derbyshire

And Then There Was You

Rating: 4.5


My life used to be a calm pool,
Still,
Serene,
Hardly a ripple disturbing the surface.
All around, the rushes stood like sentries
And the water fowls dabbled peacefully in the shallows.
On the little Japanese bridge
A young man and his lover
Stood silently
And gazed
And sighed.

Like a landscape in still life.

And then there was you.

You leapt into the pool with a great splash
That startled the water fowls out of their complacency
And set the surface dancing.
The sunlight sparkled and flashed from every wave.
The sound of the water was like the laughter of lovers.
At the water’s edge the reeds and rushes
Waved and sang to the breeze.
The young man and his lover laughed
And threw their arms around each other;
They danced with the sheer joy of it all
And ran, hand in hand
Into the woods.


© August 2009 Les Derbyshire

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sally Childress 04 June 2010

Loveley poem - thank you for sharing it.

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Sally Childress 04 June 2010

I love this poem - thank you for sharing it. From Daffodil Jackson

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Pia Andersson 25 October 2009

'And then there was you' A lovely title. A poem that whispers - yet its clear as chrystal Excellent work.....

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Gil T 14 August 2009

Nice work, Les. I was beginning to wonder if the Muse had deserted you. I do wonder, though, if the second part isn't too understated. Don't they have smileys on here?

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