I was doing just fine here on my own
and then you just had to phone
Don't ask me what I am doing
and then criticise what I'm pursuing
You may not have seen me there today
but when did I say I was coming anyway
He knows my thoughts and my heart
and we are not so very far apart
this packs a nice punch, and still remains elegant...it makes me think 'you tell em! '...great work
This is a sad one... Tia.. Andy (live your own life don't let others tell you what to do)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Some are so quick to judge. Wear a mental raincoat around those and like the rain, let it wash right off without touching you. :) Thank you for sharing. You have a way with making the mundane beautiful with your depictions of life.