And Then You Judge My Soul Poem by Tia Maria

And Then You Judge My Soul

Rating: 5.0


I was doing just fine here on my own
and then you just had to phone
Don't ask me what I am doing
and then criticise what I'm pursuing

You may not have seen me there today
but when did I say I was coming anyway
He knows my thoughts and my heart
and we are not so very far apart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duh Huh 18 March 2009

Some are so quick to judge. Wear a mental raincoat around those and like the rain, let it wash right off without touching you. :) Thank you for sharing. You have a way with making the mundane beautiful with your depictions of life.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 October 2008

A very nice poem. 10+ Love it.

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Viola Grey 14 September 2008

this packs a nice punch, and still remains elegant...it makes me think 'you tell em! '...great work

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 September 2008

This is a sad one... Tia.. Andy (live your own life don't let others tell you what to do)

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