Andromeda's Mother Poem by elysabeth faslund

Andromeda's Mother

Rating: 5.0


Dancing sands of the Celebration!
Step, step, round, and twirl...
Tilting aisles of Andromeda...we,
Leaving, learning, fixing
Our sights...tuning satellites...
Racing sand in Celebration!

Dancing sands of the Mother!
Lifting, shifting her skirts...
Recalling the baby she held to suckle...
Taming, naming it 'Andromeda'...
Tossing high, higher, out...farther-
Racing, chasing only one hour ago!

Shaking skirts free of sand!
We laugh crinkles skyward, blinking
Pin-points beckon...
In the distance, our Path, course, journey...
Ahead, behind, above...hands, that held
Andromeda,
Fluff pillows, mountains, clouds,
Of our new
Home.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Howard 18 May 2008

A stellar birth feast for a worthy princess with language as heady as the wine served to the guests.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 17 May 2008

the razzling words of beauty when celebrating the entry into the door of new home and the home is the sweet home.................thanks, i do appreciate, wishing u all the best, thanks for sharing

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Emancipation Planz 17 May 2008

These words are so well gifted that I immediately felt invited in to briefly share the celebration... so I shall depart now, smile and say congratulations! ! !

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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