Angel Ghost Poem by Lorena Walker

Angel Ghost

Rating: 5.0


forgive me my love
for the tears
you will shed
for the pain i will cause
when i am found- dead
i saw you looking at her
porcelean pale skin
i saw you talking to her
searching the soul within
now i am like her
my skin just as white
and you can search within me
i am now, dark as night
my eyes will never be the same blue
that looked upon you
my smile will no longer
come upon these lips
now the only way to touch me
is with your fingertips
and i will not respond
as i had before
you have opened apart of me
and now i close that door.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
purple moon 25 June 2007

beautiful.........sad..........poignant. well done.

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Untitiled and unnamed 24 June 2007

Sad..but well written, you paint the picture you want readers to see, very well i thought, lee..x

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Patricia Gale 24 June 2007

Straight out and to the point... remorse at its best..

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That poem was beautiful... keep writing Rissa

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