Fay Slimm

Rookie - 20 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Angels Are Forever - Poem by Fay Slimm

Gleaming with light and diffusing love's bright
But confusing array of options, wise
Angels translate into human minds right
Sense of universal law, in which lies
Every worthwhile path of life. Forgiving
Our weak foresight, angels will intervene
At times to help us help ourselves re-live
Mistakes and see another way to reason.

Their foreverness is built on love; angels
Need no other right to show true love's range.


Comments about Angels Are Forever by Fay Slimm

  • Rookie - 47 Points Meggie Gultiano (7/26/2009 3:39:00 AM)

    angels are always with us.They are here to guide ans protect us.
    There are also earth angels that we can see and touch..they are our friends and even our families.
    A nice write... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Marcella D (7/23/2009 9:32:00 AM)

    nice poem, it's very colorful into the poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 56 Points Vijay Sai R (7/18/2009 12:18:00 PM)

    a mesmerising poem! ... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (7/16/2009 4:20:00 PM)

    you are an angel indeed Fay! ! ! every time i feel like that when i read one of your heavenly pieces.... keep flying like an angel and spread lovely words..10

    with lots of love
    shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (7/16/2009 3:02:00 AM)

    Fay, Angels encourage us to follow truth to improve our way of thinking. Gandhi said if you improve yourself you improve the world. Lovely thoughts Bobx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (7/15/2009 4:11:00 PM)

    ya, , i agree wth the title..angels are forever..grace (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 145 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (7/14/2009 11:37:00 PM)

    beautiful poem. i was honored to add the 10th 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Andrew Blakemore (7/13/2009 4:20:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem Fay, we all need our angels. Best wishes, Andrew (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 478 Points Ency Bearis (7/13/2009 1:12:00 PM)

    a wonderful insight...yes indeed Angels makes our life complete...a nice simile to wonderful persons and bless them forever...well penned.....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dr Kamran Haider (7/13/2009 10:22:00 AM)

    I wonder if every human becomes an angel lie there won't be hatred and violence on earth.. beautiful write... serene and flowing through the souls... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,516 Points Marieta Maglas (7/12/2009 8:42:00 AM)

    a wonderful poem which clearly explains why the angels are with us and how much we need them for truth..10++ from me (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Gall (7/12/2009 6:27:00 AM)

    great write angels are everywhere (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (7/12/2009 5:37:00 AM)

    last two lines are superb fay...their foreverness is built on love..wow...love the unseen could do anything..lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew mark Wilkinson (7/12/2009 4:40:00 AM)

    Angels or our better nature... Andy 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (7/12/2009 4:23:00 AM)

    Their foreverness is built on love; angels
    Need no other right to show true love's range.
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    Great and fantastic imagery...well done my friend.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (7/12/2009 4:21:00 AM)

    a beautiful, loving wise poem... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, July 27, 2009


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