Angels Living In Colorless Harmony Poem by Angelic(Annie) Female
Angels Living In Colorless Harmony
They have set my soul upon the skies
My fate has sent me with teary eyes
All i view are colorless rainbows
The angels too, have lost their shadows
There's suffering in every expression
But they're laughing at my exhibition
Wondering why, no place for sympathy
How would i survive this alone, emotionally
It's when i learnt why angels laugh and sing
To suppress the danger of enemies within
They believe, trust no one, none is worthy
Regardless of their bestowing harmony
No matter what we receive in suffering
Don't let the phase halt you from loving
Let compassion fill your hearts hollow
Happily you will live, these words just follow
nice piece, written eloquently..........rated ten.............well done
dis is a nice poem! ! i realy like the 3 and 4th line... colorless rainbow is such meaning full words i think... xxx
No matter what we receive in suffering Don't let the phase halt you from loving Let compassion fill your hearts hollow Happily you will live, these words just follow..... .yet inspiring by its own introspection .thats the real path to trudge trough life when aloft in midst of sorrow loving is only panacea tomorrow.......wonderful emotion interwoven by emotion and strength of reality...yet ingenious flow by true spirit of passion, well penned,10++, thanks for sharing
You establish a mellifluous rhythm from the onset, one that is pleasing to the Readers eye...Watch your word usage...''learned'', as opposed to ''learnt'' & Stanza 3/Line 3...didn't you mean to say ''no one''? Overall, commendable craftsmanship. F j R 2010
Rich in feeling, clear diction and ofcourse a very good subject. Somewhat similar to thoughts I tried to express in THE SLOW DEATH OF A BARD and PLASTIC FACES.
Happy and positive summimg up in the final stanza. A classic piece of art, great poetry. CP
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Beautiful write...angel...10: -)