Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,722 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Angels Of The Living - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

I'm lying at the bottom
of the ocean devoid of breath
just waiting for death

Sea serpents and mutants all around me
watching and waiting
ready to feed off what's left

I see my spirit and soul
rise above me
my eyes are closing
to nothing but darkness

Then a bright light comes
and shatters the darkness
an angel appears and says
the ocean is not your resting place
your life is to be lived
now you rise and you rise
to the sound of the living


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Never take life for granted.

Comments about Angels Of The Living by Dave Alan Walker

  • Silver Star - 3,994 Points Patricia Grantham (7/22/2013 7:30:00 PM)

    I can truly say Amen to this great write Dave. An Angel of light appeared
    and rescued a soul from the pits of Hell. All kinds of spirits was waiting to
    take hold. This leads me to invite you to read my poem An Angel Just for Me.
    I am thankful that you shared this poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 8 Points Sj Holland (7/11/2013 7:13:00 AM)

    Nice poem about hope, and guidance. Very eerie about lying on the ocean floor and perceiving all of this, without breath. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,802 Points Heather Wilkins (7/2/2013 3:54:00 PM)

    life is meant to be happy and carefree. good write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Vipins Puthooran (6/21/2013 12:51:00 PM)

    rise and rise/// good poem! ! ! Top markss********************************** (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Vipins Puthooran (6/21/2013 12:51:00 PM)

    rise and rise/// good poem! ! ! Top markss********************************** (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,788 Points Ramesh Rai (6/18/2013 9:04:00 PM)

    your life is to be lived
    now you rise and you rise
    to the sound of the living
    beautiful write.xlent. thnx for sharing.
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (6/16/2013 11:52:00 AM)

    R U back? Awesome, check out Stardust. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,627 Points Smoky Hoss (6/16/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    Out of the darkness, and into the light of life; wonderful words Dave.
    Write-on! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (6/12/2013 3:35:00 PM)

    Life is a song - sing it. Life is a game - play it. Life is a challenge - meet it. Life is a dream - realize it. Life is a sacrifice - offer it. Life is love - enjoy it.
    Sai Baba

    incredible write i am in awe...you are angel of writing sir (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,190 Points Geetha Jayakumar (6/12/2013 9:13:00 AM)

    Wow..Superb!
    Beautiful poem well expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (6/11/2013 4:54:00 AM)

    Despair can be so overwhelming at times but as Val said, life is for living. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,336 Points Valerie Dohren (6/9/2013 7:16:00 AM)

    Life is for living and not to be spent in the depths of despair. Very imaginative and clever write Dave. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (6/8/2013 11:47:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, power out of there! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (6/8/2013 1:33:00 AM)

    What about those concrete shoes? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,399 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/7/2013 9:24:00 AM)

    my eyes are closing to nothing but darkness, good write, thanks.10
    I invite you to read my poems and comment and vote. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,465 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (6/7/2013 8:48:00 AM)

    Yes, you are right..never take life for granted..beautiful imagination.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (6/7/2013 8:41:00 AM)

    That's wild, Crazy good stuff. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 1, 2013


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