Animals And Birds Poem by shakil ahmed

Yes, we have evil human beings around! ! But, let us always thank the Creator; for His mercy and love. Nice work with the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing.

I enjoyed reading your poem Shakil, though you sound a bit too furious and this is like noise in your pleasant melody! Except this, whatever I say will be repeating dear Lorraine Colon's comment! Thank you for sharing your thought with us!

A nice comparison. A thought provoking poem. We are worst than Animals and birds when it comes to behaviour and conduct, although we are created as Ashraful Makhluqat one of the best creation of Almighty and Creator. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem, Shakil.

very very excellent write..........yes we humans do everything what we wish................we obliterate our kinds through wars, pollute the nature...................and even ruin the happy life of the animals and birds..........and an interesting thing to tell................that..............animals and birds kill for food or indirectly to survive...............but most of us........i mean..........the sage humans..........kill for greed...pride..................and some even for fun...............so it is very clear that these animals are far far more better than us............really a great topic to write and also a very touching write...................liked it.

Everything you say in your grand poem is true. Humans are unique creatures. We kill for pleasure, we feel no remorse in denying help and comfort to fellow human beings who are suffering. While observing nature, we see contentment among animals when they have sufficient food and water, and protection for themselves and their young from harsh weather and predators. These being the basic necessities of life should bring contentment to all human beings, but that is not the case. We always need and want more. This is our nature, and are we really to blame? To some extent it is an ugly trait, but yet it is the incentive to invent wonderful things, to forge ahead and overcome obstacles, to find cures for diseases. We are continually looking for ways to make life easier for ourselves, to ensure a good supply of tasty, healthy food (and sometimes not so healthy food) . But it's all part of the package, all part of being human. I think it is fortunate for us that there are people like you who ponder this dilemma, and write about it to get the rest of us thinking about it, and perhaps to take the appropriate action to correct our faults before it is too late. Progress cannot be stopped, but it must be carried on with more diligence and concern for our planet and everything contained in it. Very well written poem, Shakil.